Chiya ([info]striking_sparks) wrote,
@ 2006-06-19 04:43:00
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PoT: drabbles
Drabbles for [info]kessie. Pre-Tezuka/Ryoma, manga continuity, spoilers up to Genius 160/Hyoutei arc. All entirely worksafe.


the quiet of a storm approaching

The sound of cheering is almost drowned in the rumble of the plane, low overhead. You look up as it passes, wondering whether it's only your imagination that the clouds are growing and gathering in the summer heat of the sky.

You can't ignore it forever; the sounds from the court are only getting louder, and Momo-senpai is visibly hurrying as he packs away his racquet. There's nothing to be nervous about, no doubt in your mind, because this is buchou and he has told you that he will win. You sprint back anyway, and tell yourself that you're still warming up.




when was it over?

Ryoma thinks maybe it's his first glance at the scoreboard that's the worst part. Six-all, tie-break, when Tezuka-buchou had been leading so effortlessly before… Before. There is hardly any cheering, now; everyone is too busy staring at the court, mouths open as the tie-break goes on and on. Ryoma feels like he can't quite swallow; there's a weight in his stomach and all he can see is the memory of another day, another match entirely.

He watches because he has to, because he can't look away, because even in pain and desperation buchou's form is perfect. Beautiful, Ryoma thinks, as his eyes track the familiar patterns of Tezuka's movements. He feels sick.




marching through my door now

He'd known it was coming, known since those long minutes sitting together on the bench with nothing to say as the umpire had talked about risks and lasting damage. He'd known that buchou wouldn't give up, with the Nationals at stake. It had left a bad taste in his mouth, like endings, because Tezuka's last match should have belonged to him. What point is there in beating someone who can't play at full strength?

It feels weird, now, to go to practice as though nothing has happened, but there are still matches to play, tournaments to win, Nationals to aim for. It's just that the courts seem strangely empty without that silent, watchful figure; he keeps thinking that he is being watched, and turning to find that there is no one there. It's like they're all stepping carefully around an empty space, and he doesn't like it at all. He takes out his annoyance in serving balls at the falling leaves again after practice, but no matter how many hits he makes the sour taste won't leave his mouth.




if the world was on fire no one could save me but you

The look Echizen throws back over his shoulder as he leaves the clubhouse is bright and impatient and just a little smug, as though the scoreboard is a set in his favour. Tezuka feels his breath hitch as the anticipation curls and stretches through his limbs; his mind knows that it has been too long since they have played, but his body reacts to Echizen's presence. He knows himself well enough to tell that there will be sleepless nights ahead, and it is only the spring ranking matches. The thought of a year, another year, with this older and taller and even more stunning Echizen… Tezuka takes a deep breath, clears his mind, and reminds himself to focus on the match at hand. He will not give this up.




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[info]weirdlyyours
2006-06-19 04:25 am UTC (link)
Oh. Ow. The first three drabbles were all heartbreaking and post-Hyotei was probably one of the most painful times ever because gah. Tezuka. because this is buchou and he has told you that he will win. Oh Ryoma. I love his voice here, unwilling to accept that Tezuka would lose and leave--a little desperate. :(((

The last drabble was pure love. This pairing makes me so happy. ♥

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[info]achiasa
2006-06-20 01:23 am UTC (link)
♥ Thank you!

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[info]kessie
2006-06-19 10:48 pm UTC (link)
Okay. So. Am going to attempt actual coherency here. Go me!

First Drabble

Second person. Oh yes. ♥ I love this: Ryoma trying to convince himself that he has complete faith in Tezuka, even with tiny cracks appearing in this faith by the end of the drabble. I was all awwwing, while being to be sad because I knew what was going to happen. :( Wonderful beginning, even though I suspected you were going to break my heart along the way.

Second Drabble

There's a lovely sense of juztaposed opposites in this one, a definite sense of before and after. Ryoma having to watch the match helpless while remembering his own, and thinking Tezuka beautiful even while feeling sick. I felt like closing my eyes just to stop the ineveitable coming.

Third Drabble

And then you broke my heart. That's all I'm going to say. Why must you be so good at angst even when I hate it for this pairing? It makes me wibble and cry for this pairing. A definite contrast to my previous fandoms, where I used to throw everything angst and dark-ridden against the characters that I could manage. I want Tezuka and Ryoma to grow old together and have tennis. :( :(

Fourth Drabble

Thank God you ended with fluff. Oh God. *relief*

This is the TezuRyo I love. Where Ryoma has grown up, but he's still snarky and arrogant as always, and even though Tezuka recognises this he still can't help but notice that Ryoma is no longer twelve. It makes me grin like an idiot and fell all gleeful. It's the realisation that it's really just beginning for them now, and there's so much ahead of them. Thank you for ending on something hopeful, or else I might just have bawled like a lunatic.

Okay.

*gives up on coherency*

Thank you so, so much for writing these! Wow. I don't know what's better, you writing drabbles requests or just writing anyway. Both, I think. Um. Wah. ♥ I have to write something for you. Not sure what, but I'll probably pester Aja for ideas. :))

Thank you again, so much. :x

(I need a TezuRyo icon. Why do I not have one?)

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[info]achiasa
2006-06-20 01:37 am UTC (link)


See, I'm not sure I actually see this as angst per se. It's more - it's in-canon, so the resolution is already there, if that makes sense. The happy ending is waiting down the line. I hate the kind of angsty ending where they don't end up together and happy, so I write it very very rarely. In fact I think once, and that universe has an unwritten ending in my head where they end up together again after all.

jdkslhfska fic for me? *bounces* Requests are still open, really, because I'm so not objecting to people throwing inspiration at me; I'm not writing much at the moment, and I need to get kickstarted somehow.

:)) and thank you for reminding me; I've had this icon sitting on my computer since I scanned the doujin.

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[info]calann
2007-10-14 08:22 pm UTC (link)
I have just read each and every one of your TezuRyo fics and would like to say that AKLSDLKTRJKBLÖHPOKÄÖGH so much love for them all ♥♥♥♥♥♥
They make me incoherent and wibbly and gooey and the one about Karupin made me want to cry and gah. Love.

I will probably rec most of them, once I get over the worst of the impulse to simply gush.

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